I think that the story is interesting but I think you should add just a little bit of background information on the mother. What is wrong with the mother in the future? is she dead? us the relationship strained? just a little bit of background info would work out but other than that I like the story.
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I think that the story is interesting but I think you should add just a little bit of background information on the mother. What is wrong with the mother in the future? is she dead? us the relationship strained? just a little bit of background info would work out but other than that I like the story.